Kavita's Haiku Poems -3

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By Kavita Trivedi

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Autumn Rise

Buds on thorn branches

sparkle in the autumn’s mist

rich bleeding crimson

 

White Walls

Giant walls of water

crashes violently against shores

fear, death toll rises

 

Emerald Isle

A new dawn, has come

cool sea breeze, cleanses my soul

now, I forget you

 

Home time

Hard work, deadlines met

the day after tomorrow

we both shall be gone

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leni sands Level 5 Commenter 20 months ago

Great Haiku poetry

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Kavita Trivedi Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks Leni :)

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Minnetonka Twin Level 7 Commenter 20 months ago

Hi there Kavita-I not only enjoyed the beautiful Haikus but I loved the pictures that you put with them. Beautiful job.

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Kavita Trivedi Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks Minnetonka :)

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Pearldiver 18 months ago

Hi Kavita thanks for the link.. but I can't put it on my hub or I'll get 100 spammers doing the same! These are nice haiku.. why not develop their impact by encasing each of them in a small story? This would raise your word count and you hub score, while serving to showcase the haiku.

Excellent sunrise pic..

Eastern shimmers rising

In golden spears thrown to heaven

Comes in perfection - daybreak

- my gift2U..

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Kavita Trivedi Hub Author 18 months ago

Thanks Pearldiver - that makes sense, will give it a go :)

Binaya.Ghimire 9 months ago

Though all the haikus are beautiful Emerald Isle is my best.

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ubanichijioke Level 7 Commenter 7 months ago

You re awesome and gifted, my dear friend.

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Kavita Trivedi Hub Author 7 months ago

Thank you ubanichijioke

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wanzulfikri Level 2 Commenter 6 months ago

Your haiku inspires me, I want to make more Haiku like yours.

vasantha T k 6 months ago

Beautiful pictures and poems.

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Kavita Trivedi Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you vasantha

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hazelwood4 Level 4 Commenter 4 months ago

Beautiful Haiku poetry! Thank you for sharing and I do look forward to reading more of your work.

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